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Two Stories I Want To Make.. But Wich One

Fri Sep 25, 2009, 8:09 PM
Okay there are two stories that are going throw my head right now. Now I promise you kids for Forbidden Love (Dahmer's Love 2) but I don't know about Ted Bundy so I will catch up on my reading so I can make a good stories about him. But right now I will make a stories there both very creepy books. I will give you the first chapter for each one and you can read them and tell me which one you like the best.

"Mental Town"
This story is about a small town that's between Texas and Mexico. No one knows it there because it hidden behind a mountain. So only about 500 people live there. Now this town is not a normal town. There punishment is pain. And when a young man is about to marry a woman he have to cut off one his testicles our maybe a eye to have the woman he loves. And when you do bad in school. They cut off a peace of you skin on your arm. Are maybe even kill you. And when you kill someone in this small town you stuck to drink, eat, sleep and baith in your own filth for about a 2 years and then they kill in front of the hole town. And when you want a child. Well the couple must have sex in front of the town. This town a per torcher. But the man Character. "Brandy, Omar, Jessica, Daniel, Leo, Jessie, Ted, Jeffrey,and John. Plus family members and other people."

Chapter 1
There is a town far away. That most people don't even know about. In this small town pain is your punishment. Its has never been sunny in this town only once each year during or one day summer brake. In this school or logo is, "It really doses kill to go to school" Because if you hurt someone in this small town. Well you could be killed. If your grades or going down they will rip skin off you arm or even kill you. If you a woman or a even a small child in this town. Your punishment could be fatal. In this small town there are two laws. One is for woman the other is for men. Woman if you rape someone you will be shot right then in there. If your a man and you rape a woman you will be given the biggest dinner with the governor. For woman if you don't have a choice for who you have sex with. A man can have sex with a woman on the street if he wanted too. A woman have no freedom in life. Only men have there choices in life in this small town. And if your about to be married to the woman you love well you have no freedom there. You have to cut off one your testicles or your eye to win his father's "yes" a woman doesn't get to choice her man only her father. In this town you have to earn freedom.
You can only have two kids in this town. If you have more the Mr. Mindal will hang the baby him self in front of the hole town and the woman will have to live in a cell for three years eating, sleeping, drinking and bathing in her own filth. And if you try to escape this small little town well you will be torcher for the rest of your life. Losing every part of your body slowly and painfully. But tonight Omar and I will escape this town called "Mental Town"

"Ms. Michia Lecter"
I bet you have heard of Hannibal Lecter. But in the books Hannibal Lecter and Clarise Starling run away together and get married. Well did they ever have a kid or what happen to them. Well "Ms. Michia Lecter" is about a Hannibal Lecter and Agent Claries Starling child. And what had happen to the rest of the Lecter family. This storie is kina like "Hannibal Rising" and "The Silence Of The Lambs"

Chapter 1
Walking throw that long cage seeing men in different cells. I could hear her singing American Pie. But I can't see her. A few young woman where in stray jacks. Some of them look sick. I walk all the way to the end when I saw a sing on a young woman gate that said, "Mischa Lecter" I saw her sitting in a small chair farthest from me. She was moving her mouth very slowly. She had her head phones plug into her ears. And I can see her her mouth moving very slowly from left to right, then a bubble came out of her moth. She was looking at the ground then she turn her head and look up at me. She smiled and got up. She look at me for a minute then she turn her he and and put her CD player on her chair and walk over to me. She had the same eyes as her father. She had that same creepy smile as her father too. Just looking into her deep scary eyes made me want to scream. It felt like I was going to scream when she came very close to me. Thank the Lord a glass cage was covering us between her and I. She look at me for a minute and then she said something to me. "You must be Argent, Trevino. I am very happy to see you," she said with a very strange smile. "Yes I am," I said as I sat down on a chair in front of her cell. She look at me for a minute and then turn her head away from. "Your probly thinking I'm just like my mother Hannibal Lecter? Don't you," she said with a smile. "You look a little bit like him," I said to her feeling kina sick and nervous. "That funny most people I look like my mother so much. But yet I act like my dad."
"Well I don't see your mother in you at all. All I see is your father." "Yes you do probly see my father the Psycho Path. I'm have that strange scary smile. I have those sad but lonely eyes. What do you think. Your in my mother paishon, wile I'm in my father paishon." "What do you mean." "I mean about 25 years ago my father was in this very cell and my mother was probly sitting in that very chair. "I know you need help to fine my father. But why should I tell you where he is at maybe he is dead. Maybe he with Buffalo Bill." Her smile seem to fade away when she said Buffalo Bill. Her eyes close and she turn away swaying to a song that was play in her cell. She turn back around and jump and close to the cell and she could get. "How is Buffalo Bill doing. Is he held up in his little cell far away from hear," she said with a cricket smile. "Yes he fine. Still trying to become a woman though." When I said she seem laugh a little but then I found my self laughing with her at the same time. "Egli vies Italiano," she said. I didn't understand what she said all I know is egli means he in Italian. She smiled big and said, "Good bye." A tall man came over and walk away from her cell. "You see Agent Trevino we are not so different," she said as I walk out of the room.



Now tell me wich storie you seem you will like to most and I will start making it. :D


THANK YOU


Brandee

  • Listening to: Fight For You-Morgan Page
  • Reading: Hannibal Rising
  • Watching: Family Guy
  • Playing: Manhunt 2-Wii
  • Eating: nothing
  • Drinking: Water

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He is always in my heart because I love him with all my heart. I can't get him out of my head. I wish I can be with him for ever. I just want to meat him in Hevan where me and him can always be together. And no one can tell us what to do. Because I want to marry him. But he is dead so how can I.

Most people hate me. I always get into fights who make fun of me. I love to tase of human flesh. It test like Chicken mixt with beef. Most people belive it tase like chicken. Ahh I don't think it doses.
I love to wach South Park and Family Guy thoughses shows make me laugh so hard. How they way they make fun of people. And no one seem to care at all. I love Cartmen how he seem to be like me.

I feel sorry for people who got murder in life. Even thought I am in love with a murder. I still hope everyone Jeffrey Dahmer(young men and 1 boy), Ted Bundy (All Young Woman), John Wayne Gacy (Mosly Teenage boys), Ed Gein (He also barried up graves), Albert Fish (Mosly little kids). I feel sorry for all these people that these murder have killed. But I still love Jeffrey Dahmer with all my heart something about him makes me want to just love him and hold him for ever. I love him to much most people say.

I hated Middel School so much I also hated Elemtry. Most kids laugh at me and make fun of me because I am in love with a murder. I don't care what they say about me. Because I have the best friend and the most nices guy in the world. Arrianna and Lord Jessus will always be my best friends for ever. Most people think I weird because I like a murder but yet I still belive in God and Jessus. I mean everyone should belive in God adn Jessuis. Are you mite just go to hell with Adolf Hitler.
Most of my friends never really talk to me only a few people tret me very nice (Mosly my computer friends) I always have a Boyfriend. Tell some Hor and some Bich comes along and takes him away frome me. That why I mite never get marry because most men or dogs. If you don't train them they mite just run off and leave you behind and never return. I'm the kind of girl who belive in a man should love you for who you are and not for sex. But most men are like that. I mean some or very nice men and that are always nice to you. But most of them just want you for sex. I hate men that are like that.

I was born in San Antonio, Texas. But I was raised in Rome, Italy with my cousints. Who seem to love me so much. They seem to always been there for me. If I was sad or some bitch at school or some mean X-BF came and hurt me my cousint (Leo) was there to hug me and tell funny jokes of how he is going to get back at the Ass Hole who had hurt me. Oneday he almost ran over my X. He was about to kill the girl and her little Hor BFF (guy) who had stold him from me. I love Leo with all my heart and when I grow up I'm am going to go live with him in Italy.

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  • Current Residence: San Antonio Texas
  • Interests: Jeffrey Dahmer
  • Favourite movie: Dahmer (2002)
  • Favourite band or musician: Bloodhound Gang and Mindless Self Indulgence
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock and Punk
  • Favourite artist: Italian people
  • Favourite poet or writer: Writer
  • Favourite photographer: My Mom
  • Favourite style of art: scary but romanic
  • Operating System: Robert Pattinson
  • MP3 player of choice: iPod
  • Favourite game: GTA and Manhunt 2
  • Favourite gaming platform: PS3
  • Favourite cartoon character: Chowder... HE FUNNY
  • Personal Quote: Wow have

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:iconprincess-okimaka039:
Hey, I missed you.
I haven't heard from you in a while.

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hey I miss you too...

I'm starting to make a new storie

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:iconprincess-okimaka039:
Really ? Me too.

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:icon7jackass77:
yeah look at my blog and you will see it

I made two but you must pick one

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:iconprincess-okimaka039:
Oh.

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